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Can you hear me?
Am I even here
Do you feel me?
Invisible
Do you love me?
Can you touch me
Do you see me?
Invisible

Would you hurt me?
Could I even cry
Do you care for me?
Invisible

Vapour, invisible
Fading, untouchable
Vapour, falling
Can you hear me
No

Can you trust me?
Do you even know
Could you love me?
Invisible

Vapour, invisible
Fading, untouchable
Vapour, falling
Can you hear me
No

Can you hear me?
Can you love me?
Can you see me?
Can you see me ..
©2006-2009 ~xNeverXx
:iconxneverxx:

Author's Comments

This is a really slow song. I have guitar tabs that I wrote for it, too. It's just kinda, mellow, sad, questioning. I dunno how else to explain it. Anyway .. ~*//&&

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:icondarkpoisonx:
I really like this, i can really imagine it as a song, the kind that would make me cry :)

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I want her fire...her burning fire..her dark caress...her red hot kiss xXx
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:iconxneverxx:
Haha.. wow. That's funny, because this is one of my least favourites :P :) But thank you all the same <3

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* it's so pretty . let's break her *
:icondarkpoisonx:
really? lol. how bizarre.
i think your good at writing a song ^_^

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I want her fire...her burning fire..her dark caress...her red hot kiss xXx
:iconxneverxx:
Thanks : ) I've been writing lyrics/poems for some time now. I think about four years : ) Some of the stuff I have is so old.. it's crazy. But YAY.. I duno.. :P And this song actually has music to it that I wrote as well.. you picked the one 'song' that I had actually made a song :P Well, one of them anyway :P

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* it's so pretty . let's break her *

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